Saladfork
The following is a small scene that we wrote a number of years ago but that we find helpful as reference for how our formatting tends to look when we are first writing a script.
INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT
A long mahogany table stretches out across a large dining
room. VANESSA, 28, sits cross-legged in one of the chairs,
headphones in her ears, using a fork to pick her nails.
ELIZABETH, 42, walks into the room with a stack of porcelain
dishes in her arms, her dress shimmering under the light of a
crystal chandelier.
ELIZABETH
Vanessa. Vanessa! VANESSA!
Elizabeth walks around the table to confront Vanessa with
hands on her hips. Vanessa pulls off the headphones and looks
at Elizabeth
ELIZABETH (CONT'D)
Would you please stop using the
salad fork to clean your nails? Our
guests will be arriving any minute
now.
Elizabeth walks back towards where she entered.
VANESSA
It's not a salad fork.
ELIZABETH
What?
VANESSA
I said, its not a salad fork.
ELIZABETH
Well, whatever it is or is not,
would you just give me a hand?
These are your friends we are
entertaining tonight.
VANESSA
It's not whatever. You were wrong.
ELIZABETH
What difference does it make?
VANESSA
It apparently made a difference
earlier when you told me we needed
all this silverware.
ELIZABETH
Vanessa, we are having people over.
Let's be good hosts, and set the
table with our best cutlery.
Vanessa stands, swiping up a handful of assorted silverware
from the table.
VANESSA
We're eating fucking pizza Liz! I
invited my friends over for drinks
and pizza! We don't need all of
this!
ELIZABETH
Well, if you say it doesn't matter,
then fine. You can put the
silverware away.
Vanessa marches over to Elizabeth and holds the silverware
between their faces.
VANESSA
That's not the point! You're the
one who brought them out! You're
the one who insisted we had to have
them out! You're the one who called
this a salad fork when it's not!
ELIZABETH
Vanessa, lower your voice. There is
absolutely no reason to shout.
VANESSA
No! Fuck you! You always do this!
I'm 28 years old Liz, and you treat
me like a kid.
ELIZABETH
That's because you are a kid
Vanessa! You're shoving kitchenware
in my face and throwing a tantrum!
VANESSA
I'm showing you that you were
wrong! This isn't a goddamn salad
fork!
ELIZABETH
Well it's hard for me to tell since
you've scooped them all up, now
isn't it?
VANESSA
Do not talk down to me.
Vanessa and Elizabeth stare at each other, neither blinking.
Beat.
Elizabeth looks away.
ELIZABETH
Vanessa, I love you. You know I do.
I don't want to fight about this.
VANESSA
Then admit you were wrong.
ELIZABETH
I was wrong.
VANESSA
Wrong about what?
The doorbell rings.
ELIZABETH
I'll get that.
VANESSA
No! Not until you say what you were
wrong about!
ELIZABETH
Vanessa, please.
VANESSA
What were you wrong about?
ELIZABETH
You.
Elizabeth walks off, and the sound of a door opening and
muffled voices are heard. Vanessa stands motionless, still
clutching the silverware in hand.